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Hi, I wonder if you could spare a bit of time to look at my story. I am looking for some feedback to see how I can improve on it 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1457615739-seventeen-imagines-unexpected-meeting-pt-1

" Here for you " junhao bxb makes me cry when i read it, that give me unstable mental health bc its somehow relatable  author-nim your story's are french kiss