@XxNotTonightXx well, i told you i'll write youa message about the three of them, but noticing how long bleed is, i decided to write about the other woman and cigarrete only. Or that i'm not that bored to read a whole story in one day. No offence. Since i'm bringing the party, i'll start with cigarrete. Considering the age of most of the readers in this category- you need humor,desperetly. Lucky you- you already has one, and her name is jessica. Youcan add more embaresing moments or funny comments and conversations with her dark friend i forgot her name. Oops. Also a good thing- sarcasem. Harry's future wife hastons of it. Use it well. You also can add humor by describing this or situations. BUT, you have to keep the mystry and darkness in your plot so it would keep be intresting.and one more thing, usually the characters aren't single. So if harry's lover has harry, keep jessica single. Give her a stage to cry over it a little and describe her unsuccessful live life and awkward moments with boys. It's hilarious and the readers die for it. So since i'm typing to much and this message is to long i'll write you another about cigarrete. Love you!