harrabanana

@XxNotTonightXx no problem babe, it feels good to help anyway. In return you can tell about me to friends so i can help them to yeah? Call me the advicer hahaha

harrabanana

@XxNotTonightXx i mixed the stories accidently, just to make it clear: the note i wrote was about cigarrete and i'll wrote about the other womsn tomorrow. I already start reading bleed and it's good!. Have a wonderful day! X

XxNotTonightXx

Thanks very much anyway. It means the most to me!!
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XxNotTonightXx

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Thanks so much, so add humor huh? I'm trying. I wanted to add really awkward embarrassing moments with Noelle.  And Lacey will be with someone just much later in the story. For Noele she's uptight and cautious and Harry's an asshole, carefree but very cautious. I also did plan on having little sneak peeks in her past but not for the reader to get the entire reasoning of the title. And I get that a lot--- Bleed being good, I feel like I'm doing a terrible job most of the time. I feel like I lack lots of explain in details and emotions, I feel like that's where I lack.
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harrabanana

@XxNotTonightXx well, i told you i'll write youa message about the three of them, but noticing how long bleed is, i decided to write about the other woman and cigarrete only. Or that i'm not that bored to read a whole story in one day. No offence. Since i'm bringing the party, i'll start with cigarrete. Considering the age of most of the readers in this category- you need humor,desperetly. Lucky you- you already has one, and her name is jessica. Youcan add more embaresing moments or funny comments and conversations with her dark friend i forgot her name. Oops. Also a good thing- sarcasem. Harry's future wife hastons of it. Use it well. You also can add humor by describing this or situations. BUT, you have to keep the mystry and darkness in your plot so it would keep be intresting.and one more thing, usually the characters aren't single. So if harry's lover has harry, keep jessica single. Give her a stage to cry over it a little and describe her unsuccessful live life and awkward moments with boys. It's hilarious and the readers die for it. So since i'm typing to much and this message is to long i'll write you another about cigarrete. Love you!

harrabanana

@XxNotTonightXx  it's funny,cause i already started. Oops. I'll wrote you a long message about all of your stories together. It's really good!

XxNotTonightXx

Sorry. All of them? You must be a very fast reader because 'Bleed'  is close to 60 pages!! But thanks so much I'll read the long message now.
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XxNotTonightXx

Hi my names Nia and I was on @xcalliex page and saw you giving really good advice so I'm hoping you would be able to read my stories 'His Other Woman' 'Cigarette' and 'Bleed' and give me some much needed advice. It would really make my day and when the time comes I would gladly return the favor. Please message me on my profile or inbox asap. Thanks again.