Omg! U posted in my wall a LONG time ago and asked for me to see ur story! I'm SOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY I just saw it now! :O but I am still going to read it anyway!
Oh my god I'm so sorry I didn't respond earlier. I hope you forgive me and I read your story "My California King" An its fantastic!! I really love it!! Don't doubt your writing because its amazing, I'm not saying you are doubting but keep going your incredible!!