Yow Guyz! I finally published my first story, well chapter that is. I hope you like it! I personally think it's not much, no matter how much editing it has undergone, because my BEST friend, which is someone who you TRUST, FORGOT to check my story.

"I TRUSTED YOU!!! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!" -insert flying objects being thrown around-

Well, enough of my short but sweet pity party, if ever you found anything that is wrong with my story, grammar or if my writing style was different, please let me know. This is my first time writing a story, so criticism and ideas are welcome. Of course your votes, and comments of appreciation are welcome. Just be careful or my head might never fit a door ever again! Hahahahahaha!
Peace my lovelies!!!

P.S. Kiddies, no peeking!