Thank you so much for letting me know when I had repeated a phrase in my story Umbras!! I can’t believe I missed so many! A little embarrassing ahah, but thank you so much for pointing them out because I definitely wouldn’t have noticed.. <3
Hey I changed the story a little bit. I am starting it from scratch from going into jujtsu high and after to make it connect better to the war and story. check it and tell me what you think.