
holysenpai
review series by alice ⋆˚࿔ fated lovers by @yangwonton rate: ⭑⭑⭑⭑/5 hello my flower children! i know i dont usually review any book on my wattpad, most of the time i use my instagram to yap on books that i love and i think it's such a shame that i don't use this platform to show my appreciation for these amazing authors for their work that actually deserve so much more recognition. so a few nights ago, i stumbled upon a jake's fic entitled "fated lovers" by @yangwonton. it was super random and it was like 2am, i thought i needed like something angsty i could read before i went to bed, and guess what i found this masterpiece. i read the first chapter of the book — i instantly fall in love with these strings of words. what made me attached the most to this book was the heart-wrenching plot — about these two lovers who were in love with each other in the past, but are separated in the present timeline. one of them (jake) lives in the memories of her, meanwhile you (reader) completely forgot the existence of your husband from the past life. https://www.wattpad.com/story/209534772?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=holysenpai

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3) it felt so real, it felt so deep — that i could feel that my heart was clenching in pain, a whole butterflies be rumbling in pit of my stomach and something was definitely wrecking my soul every time i continued reading further and further. it HURT me that much to the point i feel like i needed to let these thoughts out of my pea-sized brain. 4) and shall we discuss about the romance in the book? it was flucking FANTASTIC — the way you could feel the actual PAIN as the characters were intensely yearning, craving, and longing for each other's presences after it seemed like forever since they reunited. it was the kind of romance that i craved for! it was intensely passionate that i could feel my heart actually burning, like i wanna burn [redacted] in a bonfire just to keep these two souls warm.
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holysenpai
5) the sensual? TOP TIER! the burning passion? CHEFS KISS! every time the author portrayed their romatic scenes together, i felt as though there was a slap on my cheeks and my brain was like "oh damn look at you, sore lonely peanut reading two people making love and actually LOVE each other" and it sucks! when i tell you, it DOES actually make me feel like oh im so lonely! i need a husband! i need someone to cuddle this instant! yup yup. 6) thats how this book makes me feel! overall, it was such a great, lovely, beautiful experience that i wish i could feel and read this again for the first time! safe to say that this is the best jake's fic i've read so far! and i needed more of it. and i think its such a waste if i didn't share this book to everyone. i mean, this book only has 11k reads when it deserves so much more than that. i definitely do not want to gatekeep something as beautifully-written story such as this one! 7) and i definitely wanna read this again in the future to make me feel... im in another dimension and experience "what is love" all over again.. sincerely, alice <3
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holysenpai
1) the threshold of the story already had me hooked — it started unveiling the backstories of the characters, how did they fall in love, how did they both own a small family, then afterwards lead to a point of life where both of them were eventually separated and live in a life where they do not know each other anymore. 2) i wish these little silly words of mine could do justice on how i love the way the author portrayed these characters and their raw emotions throughout these chapters! i was deeply moved, my eyes blurred through every lines that was written, the dialogues were making it alive through the screen as i was delving deeper into those characters and storyline.
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