DollymkMine
Honestly, your story was one of the most beautiful things I’ve ever read ✨ If I didn’t read it, I felt like nothing else really mattered. I was so into it, like I was actually there with them inside the story
Hermione especially was so funny, and Ron too
If I could suggest one thing though, maybe add a bit of jealousy or small issues between them, because no love is perfect without some problems
And Draco? He was genuinely so fun to read It was a beautiful story and I hope it continues.
DollymkMine
@howtomakelovestay Do you know the kind of jealousy that arises from feelings and relationships, like what happened between Ron and Hermione in the dance party or how his jealousy increased because of his relationship with Cho or any one else
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howtomakelovestay
@ DollymkMine Thanks for reading and thanks a lot for the feedback!! I love getting to know the experience of readers. I do love jealousy lol (can I ask how do you imagine it? I am always open to ideas) and like you say, no relationship is perfect and they are closer to the one year mark. Relationships change, go through different moments and I love that we will get to see them grow together.
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