ice_bearyoon

Read this novel near to reality hope so u all also like it jazakillah
          	
          	https://my.w.tt/RP9REVr0T4

Bintehawwa_writes

Thora sa koshish krein dialogues ko seperate lines mein likhein...baqi ap acha likhti hain...thora sa writing patterm bs improve krein...:)

ice_bearyoon

@Bintehawa_writes ok thank u so much I will try to improve .
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