itlognapula_
basta aabangan ko mga next chapter at gusto ko pang mabasa yung isa mo pang story
ijuanawrite
itlognapula_
i love u and your writing style, i hope you continue the story:>
profjaycee
basta aabangan ko parin next update mo kahit abutin ka pa ng ilang araw at linggo. Wag mo na lang pansinin mga bashers mo. Andito parin naman kaming naniniwala at nag aabang sayo. your story your rules. Nakuha mo talaga inis ng karamihan, so meaning may atake. Just read in silence guys. Wag tayong magsalita ng tapos. Wala pa tayo sa ending. lab you otor! basta tapusin mo to ha!
adnsxzie
sa totoo lang nagulaaat akoo ahahhaha hanggang ngayon pag naalala ko na nag cheat si sunnie natatawa ako ng bongga, well i get where yung anger ng ibang reader is coming from kasi diba out of nowhere talaga and something we didn’t expect from sunnie. and ofc it hurts knowing na cornelia loves her so dearly. BUUUT i don’t think hate is necessary, like this is how the author wants the story to be we can’t do something about that so respect. drop the story or whatever the story will go on as it is.
will always be excited waiting for your updates thor, great job! nakuha mo ang inis HAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHA
ijuanawrite
@adnsxzie anyway, ang daming nashock sa ginawa ni Sunnie noh? Panis BUWAHAHAHA nakakainis lang na nawala yung excitement kong bilisan na isulat yung nect chapter. My ghad, I love my plot. But anyway, ayaw na ng iba na bigyan to ng chance LOL hahhaha
Khio01
I'm sorry po otor kung nadala ako sa emotions ko at nagalit ako sa character ni Sunnie na-trigger ako sa cheating kc may naalala ako dyan but reading the chapter as well as other people comments/thoughts on it, I understand how hard it is for you to write this kind of things too. This is the reality of relationships, people's nature & life.
One chapter does not define the whole story so di ko susukuan to, I'll stay through the angst part & keep on looking forward sa next chapters. This is my fave story so I'll see it through the end no matter what. I hope you find the strength & motivation to continue writing and sticking to your plot & not be swayed by the negative comments.
There's just one thing Im really curious about, this ain't gonna turn into a poly right? I checked the summary if something change but wala naman so praying for it to be Sunnie & Cornelia endgame still
ps. please let Sunnie suffer through the consequences of her actions and sana pumasok sa eksena si Louise so she can see how to treat Cornelia right.
pps. please don't let Cornelia be in the dark about the cheating, she deserves to know immediately and if it will lead to them breaking up then so be it. Maybe its for the best for Sunnie's character development
ijuanawrite
@Khio01 I understand. And this is not poly, I'm not fond of that genre. I'm not good at too many characters to be honest. Ito ang kahinaan ko. That's why, there's more chapters ng main MC lang than those na kasama ang extra.
arcadia_Moon
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Key takeaway here? Kudos to the author! That was so unfiltered, otor... I can imagine how uncomfy your seat was while writing that. Other authors try to write plots like this, but yours will be the one i trust. It's gonna be ugly, but i know you'll do something good with it.
Perhaps a lesson for us, readers.
(Also...
I hope SOME of these people realize...
THAT THEY HAVE CREATED A STANDARD NOT JUST TO FICTIONAL CHARACTERS BUT ALSO TO FICTIONAL CHEATING!)
arcadia_Moon
People would rather a situation where the main character cheats WITH the other main character... Not when the main character cheats ON the other main character. Because it's still cheating. Cheating is always wrong.
But it's real, the author writing it is not the author promoting more it --- it's the author writing fiction.
And fiction? (Tinuro 'to sa 21st Century Lit. Mga kupal!)
FICTION IS THE MIRROR OF REAL LIFE. Real human experience put into words.
It can't get simpler than that... Moral dillemas depicted in stories are not the authors being evil or smth. If you think it's wrong, then just remember... All writings are mere reflections of our reality. Cheating is real and wrong no matter if in real life or in the fictional words we make and read.
The scene is not acceptable for us as your moral standards should be pretty straightforward in telling you that it's wrong and you shouldn't do it, even a 5 year old know that.
And writing them into the plot is going to be even more uncomfortable. Reading them will also be.
I believe that the conversation ends there. Stories like this is uncomfortable, unlikeable. And that's your morals reminding you (good job, morals!)
If it gets too hard for you to read, that's when you stop reading.
And if you are so morally correct and righteous and sensitive, when a plot gets too hard to read, remind yourself that you do not get to tell the author to twist the plot. You just have to reflect on the part where you can't twist reality's facts just because you don't like it.
arcadia_Moon
Reading the way you out words together in the former chapters, i have reasons to believe that you'll make good use of the plot. Maybe a lesson to the readers, maybe something more.
But it's so true that people are quick to make their judgements. Not even a wee bit of space for benefit of the doubt for this context --- I'd understand if it was in real life and you just turn off, that's absolutely fine --- but the way they were confident enough to say stuff like that, makes me worry talaga sa kanila. Hahaha
Siguro nga they can tolerate the kind of cheating that feels good, that aligns with their standards (may standards sa cheating dito sa watty, eh. Lolz) But never cheating for what it can really be, what it can really look like.
I'm the kind of reader who looks beyond the text written, i like seeing the intent of the author. And i can see yours po, although i really don't know how it'll unfold. I just know you'll put it into good use.
These kinds of plots require trustworthy hands, y'know? So, please don't stop writing!
The ‘cheating standards’ that exist in the watty world can be dismantled through your plot if done right (however that may be). You're doing them a favor by showing it unfiltered. Showing the real and raw and wrong.
Not every author can do that!
Goodluck to us, readers, nalang lolz cause damn am i getting nervous hahahahahhshaha
ijuanawrite
@arcadia_Moon and you're absolutely correct that the first person that had the hard time with ugly scenes are the ones who's writing it. I have been contemplating about this for a long time before I get to decide to publish this. Character development does not work only kapag inaapi. There are a lot of reasons. And the reason why I chose this kind of conflict has not been answered yet kase nga hindi ko pa narerelease yung ibang chapter. But these people already made their judgements.
badingkb_pre
Don't mind them thor. I still support you and super excited na ako sa mga ganap sa next chapters
itspsyduck
Hindi na po bago yung mga ganyan tao
jligkjfjlfj
Di mawawala yung mga entitled na reader. Kindly blocked them po. (Except meeee )