inkedofstars

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So if it's an emotional attachment story between two people with the male lead being possessive right from the start—and then he goes on to arrange a three-fucking-some? With the character who was like a brother all along? LIKE WHAT??? WHYYY? WHY DO THAT TO ME? T _ T

PriyaRagunath

 Waiting for Vincenzo  update. Love ur writings  always gives us surprise  in chapter.  Please please post soon. 
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PriyaRagunath

@inkedofstars  s this about ur new story? Any way in my opinion if people enjoy being with other like that then nothing is wrong its their life to live how they want no one can comment.  Its their love they feel u cannot  choose whom u ll fall for it just happens..
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LiterallyIsa

Girlllll pls update :((( I love ur story
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inkedofstars

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So if it's an emotional attachment story between two people with the male lead being possessive right from the start—and then he goes on to arrange a three-fucking-some? With the character who was like a brother all along? LIKE WHAT??? WHYYY? WHY DO THAT TO ME? T _ T

PriyaRagunath

 Waiting for Vincenzo  update. Love ur writings  always gives us surprise  in chapter.  Please please post soon. 
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PriyaRagunath

@inkedofstars  s this about ur new story? Any way in my opinion if people enjoy being with other like that then nothing is wrong its their life to live how they want no one can comment.  Its their love they feel u cannot  choose whom u ll fall for it just happens..
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LiterallyIsa

Girlllll pls update :((( I love ur story
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puta_crazy5

Thank you for writing Mr Vincenzo book, this was an amazing read and I  can not wait till its finished. This book I had to put down at times as I was so into reading it that the emotions and the love and the pain etc was so strong it felt so real. It is one of my favorites and hoping it will never get deleted ever as I will read it over and over it was that good. You did an amazing work with this book if it is put on Amazon I will buy it because I don't want to loose an amazing book to read! Thank you so much. 

inkedofstars

We're No. 2 in #bestfriendsdad and that's like crazy. Never even happened with the old book.

PriyaRagunath

I salute u. . Hope u release a book on this story and I will  be first  to buy it
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PriyaRagunath

@inkedofstars  wowow... Congratulations i thought no 1. Ur writings  are best and make way to heart. U created such a beautiful  Vincenzo character. Through ur writings  u make us feel real emotions . Vincenzo  Eloise  character  too such a strong  n mature character  both of them r made for each other type.   Through ur writings  u bring out the real feelings  and emotions  so beautiful.   God bless u always and bless ur hands. VINCENZO  will be always close  to my heart. There may be hundreds of stories but ur story stands out and captures my heart its like I can read 100 times again n again  still gives me same nostalgia feeling like first time reading ur words carry that much of depth. I m running  out of appreciation  words for ur work
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inkedofstars

When I started Mr. Vincenzo, I had like 4 followers and today, it's 575. Even the republished book is reaching 300k reads. Crazy, isn't it?
          
          I just want to thank everyone who showed my work such love! 

Livvvvv1555

@inkedofstars youre writing is honestly one of the best Ive ever read on Wattpad! Every story you create feels so alive - I loveeeeee how deeply you bring each of the character to life. Its hard to believe you only have 585 followers because girl?? Your work deserves thousands!!
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pearlmayana

And eloise is the most selfish person and she was never a true friend of Arya, from the beginning of her relationship with Vincenzo all she cared about was how Vincenzo is going to get hurt if arya hates him but she didn't give a damn about what it's going to do to arya how it's going to hurt her and at the time of accident also she wanted arya to understand because Vincenzo was hurting not because arya was hurting and in the matter of eveline also all she cared about was him never about arya some great friend she is and that slap she landed on arya how f*****g dare she and Vincenzo clearly loved his daughter to let that happen 

inkedofstars

@pearlmayana Her father and best friend love each other—there's nothing in it that would shatter her world. It would shake but not shatter.
            She accusing Vincenzo of molestation and more—yes, this would shatter him.
            Hence the depth of their hurt is different and explains why Eloise chose to stand with Vincenzo.
            
            About the rest, be it Eloise slapping Aryanna or Vincenzo blaming her, you are not taking their POV in consideration, what they were going through when it happened. So if you're only going to consider Aryanna's side, then I cannot say much.
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pearlmayana

@pearlmayana this is what I was speaking about ,you so easily discarded Arya's feelings and what temporary are you talking about he could have loose his daughter because of what they had done and it is not only 'how could they ?' it is about months of betrayal, months of lying, months of him prioritising his lover over his daughter, it is about the promise he made that he will never make her cry, but he is person who made her cry rivers, it is about each and every moment he risked his relationship with his daughter, it about how he knew this is going to shattered her and still when with it and its about how he choose to stand with eloise the moment the truth come out instead of being with his daughter, it is about letting his lover slap his daughter, it is about him making her the killer of how his unborn child and it is about the difference he showed between her and his unborn child ,it is about not believe her when she said she called the ambulance, it is about blaming her for his lover accident and it is about how their relationship is never going be the same and so don't just say it is only about how could they it is much more than that and Vincenzo's hurt because of aryanna's action no it is because of his actions they are standing in this position and eloise she clearly choose to play the role of his girlfriend at every give step instead of being a friend and she is clearly was selfish in every way possible because trust me when I say this when call someone out bestfriends we wouldn't even a let a word of us hurt them much stabbing them in the back
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inkedofstars

@pearlmayana Aryanna's hurt about their relationship was always temporary like 'How could they?'
            Vincenzo's hurt (as a result of Aryanna's possible actions) would have been the deeper kind. Hence, Eloise always worried more about Vincenzo.
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pearlmayana

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And author it's actually disturbing me to think what kind of father Vincenzo actually is because he claimed that arya was his everything and his only family but when she goes through something as vile as molestation and he didn't even bother to check on her for freaking three months because of what, because she did and said vile things to him when it was him who actually hammered the first nail in their relationship by doing this and by keeping her in the dark for so long when he clearly knew what her mother meant for her, in the name of protecting her feelings he let her harboured those feelings for too long until it hollowed her and the audacity to say that he was relieved that their was no mention of rape as if that makes everything ok and when his girlfriend said what happened with her he was raging like a bull and he was looking like he was ready to murder him and it was ok for eloise to face trauma about the thing which happened with her but don't remember how it happened and this is what attracted her to Vincenzo but it was a small thing when to comes arya who faced that in her full consciousness and it's going to engrave in her for lifelong and he says that he is relieved that she was didn't rape and at this exact point it clearly reflected where his priorities actually lies who is more important to him despite him saying it loud and who was he clearly ready to sacrifice if given the choice.
          It's true a man can never choose the child who is born out of his teenage mistake over his child who is born out of love.

pearlmayana

@inkedosyars please read that chapter clearly and come and say to me again that he said that sentence considering everyother person but only eloise 
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inkedofstars

@pearlmayana Wade still hasn't talked to Eloise directly about that incident - FYI.
            Plus, when Vincenzo said he should have raised Aryanna stricter, it was for more than just Eloise. It was for everyone she could hurt like she did Eloise 
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pearlmayana

@pearlmayana atleast from what I understood wade would have not done anything like Vincenzo he would have run to her the moment he found out unlike Vincenzo, who clearly waited  another 3 months to talk to his daughter after knowing about it and in total what six months and i clearly remember him saying in some chapter that he should have raised arya stricter because he couldn't stand eloise being hurt or her tears like what the heck it was clear who was more important to him and whose tears affect him the most and if it's about comparison eloise got much more that arya could ever get 
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pearlmayana

I contemplated writing this but I couldn't stop myself and dear author you don't have to read this if you find it as a rant, when you started writing this story I had so much expectation that it's going to be different from the rest of the stories and author's who writes stories with such genre and i thought atleast you are going to justify the feelings of each and every character instead of glorifying only the main characters and making them unbelievable and exceptionally sweet, i thought atleast you will not make the daughter villain and justify her feelings instead of vandalizing them and let her be because in actuality the father who said that she is his whole life and the girl she considered as bestfriend both of them betrayed her in the worst way possible and don't justify saying that they didn't knew at the time they met because even if he didn't knew, he clearly knew that eloise is half his age and involving with the girl who is the same age as your daughter is actually sick irrespective of whatever you say and in the end it turned out to be like every other story which applies the same pattern and stop saying he sacrificed his life for his daughter he simply took responsibility of his actions anyways it's your story you can write however you want and however you like

inkedofstars

@pearlmayana Hi. I'm glad you wrote this. Just want to counter a few things 
            Aryanna is not the villian. She was manipulated and that's everywhere between the lines. How Eloise or Vincenzo feel about her is not who Aryanna is.
            About age, Vincenzo slept around a lot before and he has said it - the criteria falls away.
            And I don't think the word 'sacrificed' is used. If it is, it's not from Vincenzo. But he actually chose to take the responsibility of a child - that changed how his life ever could have been, so he did spend his life for her.
            
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