BornAndRaisedHawaii

Hay i just saw you in some fantasy stories..I am writing a novel can you pls read it and give me feedback where should i correct it?

Hello if you want to read a story with Mafia, mystery, thriller, Romance and with some steamy scenes. Well 'Heart's Error' will not disappoint you. Please just give this story a chance. https://www.wattpad.com/story/321303073?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Venice1038&wp_originator=HHgzizgL%2FiIqd2jt9R8b0zdgpIrUOtxDZHGHADCRZ7dgpkhGHKLiNpJDWlkZUktHAqnoK5n%2F2KJ5HMijccbh3XCwj0lWuq4sGoR0rphqmGsy7EjqK1sBObcYUC1HoQ1E

Thank you for voting for Exposed!

Hey islandvives808~~Thanx for voting on "Crissa's Mate."  And because you are new to my work, and such a sweetie, I'm sending you a short story of mine to save for those times you're home alone . . . and feeling. . . well you know. . . a little naughty :)
          
          Warning: There's some mature content in Part 4--but not anything you probably haven't already . . . thought about . . . or do yourself sometimes in those solitary moments :) 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/16999941-a-walk-in-the-countryside
          
          Enjoy my reads. 
          ~~Califia

Thank you for the follow!

Hi, thanks for reading and voting on The Crossing!  I appreciate your support. 

Thank you for reading and voting on The Elements of Rage! I hope you enjoy my work!

Hello there, kind person! 
          
          Thank you for giving "Paradise lies" a chance and an even bigger thanks for voting! 
          
          I really appreciate it so much as each and every one of those reads/votes/comments support me and my writing a lot. 
          
          Once again, thank you! ❤️❤️❤️
          
          Have a wonderful day! Happy reading! Take care!
          
          Yours,
          Callie
          
          

Hello there! Thank you so much for.choosing my story to read and the votes are always appreciated. I hope you're enjoying the story thus far. -E.