Rae

Hi! Dear friend. I am sorry to post it over here. But can you give me reviews on my story. It's my first time writing a story. Hope you will like it .
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/355857403?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Jot_10

https://www.wattpad.com/story/360989322?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=vaani_tyagi