Good Afternoon
The Dating Game
I enjoyed it truly, I love how you get to the point. I spot no grammatical errors and I don't know if I was too caught up in your book to realise it haha.
I like how Cody story was told, I feel her.
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Clarify the point where you say Sky have never dated before becz u mention that in high school, she was with someone and it lasted 3 months anyways so yah that's consider dating maybe not a relationship but dating.
How Sky has her own place at 18?? Not saying it doesn't happened but maybe telling how would be great. I am really wondering.
Where her parents at?? Sumn happen to them??
Does her parents well support this if they still alive or about I guess??
But everything else was good, I am waiting for your updates, more like eager!!! *screaming*
Just continue to be u which by ur bio u definitely will, continue to write and enjoy it, ull get your reads and comments.
Lots of luv @kiama771♥♥