ApolloLaChanqleta

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          B4 her parent or older sibling knocks him unconscious. The criminal family holds Blake as a hostage and kidnap him maybe? And perhaps they can use him as a bait for their next ploy.? But Blake's brothers find out (ransom call maybe, or something else? The bf/gf confessing the truth to the Taylor boys bc His/her boyfriend's life is in danger and s/he doesn't want anything bad to happen to Blake bc of him/her) and they save him/ or something?
          And later Blake turns back to his brothers and he's really ashamed of his actions and he says "You were right. I'm sorry" and it's really emotional and cute?

jade7151

Hey thanks for the idea I may use this in the future of this book or another book once I've finished this one, this is a really good idea though, thanks for the comments and the votes on the book as well really appreciate it I'll be uploading the next chapter soon I'm just writing the part 2 of it  and then I'll upload it <3 
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ApolloLaChanqleta

Here's just an idea for your brothers story. The message was too long for the comments section in the actualy book so I pasted it here:
          
          I've always wanted to see how older brothers would react upon seeing their little brother date someone (guy. Girl, whatever you like) who's nice at first and the big bro's all like him/her at first but then the boy/girlfriend starts manipulating the Blake, making him do things "for love". They would say "if you love me, then you'll... (blah blah blah)" and Little Brother doesn't want to "do that" But he doesn't want to lose his partner either so he does then later Blake likes it {illegal stuff when he's going into his teenage years} so he does more of it willingly and he like sneaks out at night to do stuff like that. The big Brothers notice the sneaking out but they don't say anything, to see where their Little Brother is going then the big bro's at some point are like "Stop. This is too much" and Blake could be like "No. You can't tell me what to do" and maybe an argument happens then Blake runs away and he crashes around the bf/gf's house, only to maybe find out that the gf/bf was using him to do actual illegal stuff which helps his/her parent's illegal business or something. Maybe the parents are wanted criminals undercover.
          And the bf/gf confesses they actually liked Blake but Blake's all like "How can I trust you. I got on the wrong side of my brothers, bc of you. I did illegal stuff bc I thought it was cool  I did everything just to make you happy, so you wouldn't get unhappy with me and this is what you turn around and do?" and Blake has a go at her, 

TigerLover080203

Thanks for the vote on Two Brothers Book 2! Hope you enjoy the next chapter. Also if you haven't read the first book, go check it out. 

jade7151

No problem I can't wait for the next chapter of Two Brothers Book 2 and I have also read the first book I really enjoyed reading it and it was so good! 
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