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@TEJJohnson  Thanks to YOU!! I thoroughly enjoyed Cataindar, and I am very excited to see that you are about to begin posting the sequel! The story is so original and thrilling in its own unique way that I'm sure it will have very few troubles getting published. :) 
          Have a great day!

Hey Jami! 
          
          I just wanted to write you to thank you for reading Cataindar and your support for the book! Your comments were awesome. 
          
          Im so jealous you like by the beach. 
          
          I hope you enjoyed the read and you have a great Easter!!

@shalonsims You're welcome! I had noticed that you followed me, and when someone follows me I like to check out any stories they have as a "thank you". And I'm glad I did! Even though it was a short story, it was a powerful one! You did a great job with it. 
          
          I actually think that new title would represent the story better. The original one was alright, but all the reader knows about the "fat farms" is that energy is harvested from the people there. The new title you suggested portrays more of the plot theme. 
          
          Thanks!

Hi Jami, thanks for citing for my story, Fat Farm. Do you mind if I ask how you found it on wattpad? Also, I'm thinking of changing the title to The Critical Zone. What do you think, is that a better title?

@triptych You are very welcome! I'm loving the story. It's definitely worthy of many more votes, and I am certain it will get them in the near future. You are a great writer!

Thanks for the votes on Sarah7!

@AlinaKG You are very welcome! I'm really enjoying the story so far. Well, back to reading! 

Thanks so much for your support! Really appreciate your votes and comments.

That sad moment when you get disappointed because you have turned sixteen and nothing exciting happened.

@Vapurr Yes I have and I must say that it is probably one of the best books on Wattpad! I would venture to say that your book has the potential to be one of the "greats" also! :)