love the book but I agree with the person who needs editing but u also had needed advice on the situation about Skylar and John about the abuse and stuff...I have some comments so message me if u want/need my opinion on anything
Your story, My first Emo with Benefits is really good. And it could be better if you had an editor. If you want, I would be happy to edit your stories. Message me privately or leave a comment on my profile.
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