jdentikker22

MY PEOPLE .  I HAVE WRITTEN A NEW BOOK THAT ILL BE PUBLISHING SUM STUFF TO . LOOK OUT FOR PARTS COMING SOON !!!!

Haha thx for the review kinda thing though, the advice really helped and I think I did a little better on the short story.. I ended up reading a little prophet of Zoth I think I had nightmares about the wording of "groups" too, but this new one the word bots is a little over dialouged but other than the it is ok. I think 

Hey! Thanks for the follow :P
          I'll be giving you a short review for your new story a lil later cause right now I can't. I'll think about it and then tell you what's good and what's not. Well, some people wondered why I give good advices when my books su*k (ok, people didn't tell me they su*k but I know they do)..I heven't really started writting real stuff yet...Just like you, I made that just to prove people that I can write. But I wrote that things just for fun. See ya.
          ~LO's :3