jdeversky

Well I went and did some weird stuff with Sunder. I went in a direction I wasn't even aiming for. I lOVE IT THOUGH! I hope you do too. CHeckit out leave a comment tell me, tell me, tell me! I must know thought! Xoxoxoxox PTAs

deborahaolaleye

Hi.
          I just started a romance book on here and was hoping you could check it out and give your thoughts on it.
          Thanks.https://www.wattpad.com/story/350330070?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=deborahaolaleye

jdeversky

@deborahaolaleye Can I ask if you are wanting constructive criticism? Or points of editing or just feedback on engagement? Sometimes it's hard to give one with out the others. 
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jdeversky

@deborahaolaleye of course id love to! thank you for asking me! 
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jdeversky

Well I went and did some weird stuff with Sunder. I went in a direction I wasn't even aiming for. I lOVE IT THOUGH! I hope you do too. CHeckit out leave a comment tell me, tell me, tell me! I must know thought! Xoxoxoxox PTAs

noFOOKINidea

Hi.
          I hope you're accepting reading requests. I've started a new story "an anatomy of a wounded soul". It is a thrill/mystery teen fiction. 
          
          https://my.w.tt/MosMBd8jW5
          
          I hope you take a chance to read the story. 
          
          Please do and leave feedbacks. 
          
          Thank you.
          Aditi.
          ❤
          

jdeversky

@noFOOKINidea absolutely! Thank you for the request . Also clever user name I like it. :) That alone sold me on  reading  your story. 
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