crazycowlover
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JUST WANT TO SHOW PEOPLE HOW WHAT YOU SAY CAN COME BACK AND BITE YOU IN THE BUTT! THIS IS WHAT I FOUND ON A WATTY AWARD ENTRY AND LETS JUST SAY THAT I AND ALOT OF PEOPLE ARE NOT HAPPY WITH HER!! this story is lame. incorrect spelling of words, grammars and even the plot.it's just stupid when a father would risk pushing his daughter to have sex with just anyone. that doesn't show a father loving his own daughter but a father who is crazy enough for his child to get raped. and its just out of character of the protagonist to use the words, "ew daddy". duh, she was said to be a lowly servant not a malibu brat barbie. hell, what happened to the word 'creativity and accuracy to this story?? I WANTED TO SHOW EVERY ONE HOW DUMB YOU ARE. DO .NOT. PUT. STUFF. UP .HERE. LIKE .THIS. IT. IS. WRONG! YEAH, ITS LIKE THAT! YOU NEED TO GO BACK TO HER AND SAY SORRY, YOU WORTHLESS WASTE OF SPACE! YOU DONT LIKE HER WRITING THAN BE NICE ABOUT IT. DONT SAY STUFF LIKE THAT WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE! I HOPE THAT YOU SEE YOU WRONG AND MAKE IT RIGHT IF NOT PEOPLE WILL SEE HOW YOU TRUELY ARE WITH THAT IM OUT!