Completely rewritten chapter 3 of The past is a dangerous place has been posted, way better than the first one. First two chapters are finally where I want them as well.
Completely rewritten chapter 3 of The past is a dangerous place has been posted, way better than the first one. First two chapters are finally where I want them as well.
So I'm deleting The Past is a Dangerous Place and I'm rewriting. I'm thinking of adding some extra characters and fleshing it out a bit now that I have a base. I've already rewritten the first chapter so I'll post that and it's very similar but the rest will change a little more so yeah. Some backstories will change and the names of characters will change because I didn't like them so yeah. Hope you enjoy :) Please let me know what you think!