Thank you kindly for all of your wonderful comments on “The Angel of Vengeance”! They were definitely helpful, and you’ve given me quite a bit to think about over the next few weeks — which I intend to use to perfect these first three chapters before moving on. =)
Most importantly I want to thank you for pointing out how confusing it is in regards to how long Zoe has lived in town. I reread some parts of the chapter after you commented, and now I can’t help but cringe. I really did write that terribly!