i read "hope has wings" in 2009. Something sparked my memory &I haven't been able to get it out of my head. I only remembered much I loved the relationship b/t ur characters Romeo & Juliet but no title. After testing keywords in google which included "angel, homeless girl taken in, romeo, juliet, wattpad" i found ur story-only to face a broken link that reminded me why the memory of ur story had been bittersweet--it had been left unfinished &deleted. later,by some miracle I was able to access my old wattpad profile &found that i was still following u after five years! Now I see that u've begun to repost! But u've revised the work-i admire ur ambitions to make ur work into something better than the original, however I'm a bit sad about one major change that you've made: Maybe I'm just being stubbornly nostalgic, but i wondered why u changed romeo's name to aaron. I thought it was so clever that "rose's" name was juliet but she hid it out of embarrassment after meeting romeo. It was one of the distinct things i recalled & to return to reading ur story &see that change made me a little sad.I am aware that u most likely had a reason for revising that part of the story in the way u did-i just wanted to express my feelings about it.It means a lot to me that u've taken the time to repost. this story had made enough of an impact on me to persuade me to come back & relive the days of wattpad, which has been absent from my life since 2010. ur story was the most well-written out of the bunch of wattpad stories i used to burn through. ur story is reminiscent of the fruits basket series to me in the way that it is nostalgic, sweet, &emotionally invests readers in the characters (i find similarities b/t kyo & romeo). im not sure if ure familiar with fruits basket, but i mean the comparison as a compliment.wishing u the absolute best of luck in ur publishing endeavors. thanks for sharing! Finding this story after a cluster of years is like rediscovering a lost memory.
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Chloe