Dear Jesterjamz,
I began reading Tally Hall's Marvellous Magical Mishaps as a joke, and was initially put off by the silliness. But it didn't take me long to embrace how goofy and unusual this concept was! It's a very unique idea and so much could be done with it.
I only have one request for the rewrite, if it happens:
Please allow Zubin to say something along the lines of, "Wow, even in a skirt I still look better than all of you."and also give him an excuse to say "You're just mad, because you can't pull it off like I can."
Thank you.
Keep up the good work,
Tallytastic