LorenzoFerrari2002

When the next chapter?

LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            When the next chapter?
            
            Sorry, my patience has never been my best quality...
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LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            Just for curiosity, have you seen the messages and informations I sent you in the inbox?
            
            If yes, what do you think?
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LorenzoFerrari2002

Where did you have the idea for Sirius's semblance in "Oscar Pine and the Goblet of  Fire"? That was genius!

LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            Oh. It's still genious.
            
            New chapter today or tomorrow?
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jonesman1096

When I was trying to think of new semblances, I heard try to look to my hero’s Academy for inspiration, then I asked the Facebook rwby fanfiction who gave me some ideas. from what I understand the idea for Sirius’s was a mix of reality and probability manipulation, which made me realize semblances I have for the wizards might be overpower, so to balance them out I’m making there powers use a lot of aura and the exhaustion that comes when someone breaks their aura hit them harder.
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LorenzoFerrari2002

I was reading the description of your profile and, among your various ideas for stories, I found this one:
          
          [ Team RWBY goes to Hogwarts story] 
          After the events of painting the town, Ozpin gets a visitor from an old friend who comes to ask for help, so now team ruby finds themselves in a school that teaches magic trying to keep a black-haired boy with a lightning bolt scar out of trouble. 
          
          This is actually a really good idea.

LorenzoFerrari2002

I completed the reading. I only didn't lay much comments and only enjoyed reading
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jonesman1096

@LorenzoFerrari2002, I noticed you left some comments on the newest chapter of Goblet of Fire, but it seems that you didn't complete reading it.  Did anything in the later part of the chapter catch your attention?
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jonesman1096

@LorenzoFerrari2002, I wanted to let you know that I am currently working on the ending. Also, I am on spring break at the moment. Hopefully, it will be out by then.
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LorenzoFerrari2002

When the next chapters of your stories?
          
          Sorry, I become quickly impatient. Trust me, I'm tring to fix it.

LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            Can you try to do it a bit faster? Only if you can.
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jonesman1096

It’s fine I’m going to try to update Oscar Pine monthly, and I’m working on Intervention
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