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Hello! My friend @SierraFarted has been wanting some honest opinions on her story “Seth the Killer”. I was wondering if you would be willing to read some of her work and give it some criticism.
          
          She wants to rewrite the story and needs to know what she can improve when she does it. You don’t have to if you don’t want to, but it would mean a lot to the both of us.
          
          Thank you either way! I hope you have a nice day! ❤️
          
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