My first proper story 
          I just published "chaos of war " of my story "he who has reminded the gods that even halos are meant to break ". https://www.wattpad.com/1208554325?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=joshisdibidis&wp_originator=UkB%2Fa%2FZ7cVsnMVESf7QqvgkzQvDaal9ImjiMuv8CYLr%2BI4r9%2BuLuHpmjNgWDE2dJg05zs%2BCdH%2Fb%2BvC4JXFnkA22lFYdMd30zSxp75aMngvApxc0T%2FVsIrw6BKsNR3y2E

Seriously read and comment storyline ideas I desperately need help 
          I just published "MORE WEAPONS " of my story "Rangers frontier ". https://www.wattpad.com/1183646453?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=joshisdibidis&wp_originator=yZyNTp6P8GojPuvC6HCeJlRSYRgi%2F1b8UTkdHwJfxn2FskHg9SnhQ4RDNAdU0AGIqCuof7qzeow7ec%2FimqBuyXz7d0MVrY082nKeS8JS8oZdP2UwkY8ypz1h9fOF0V8W

Soooo here is my first story WARNING this doesn't have meat on it's bones feel free to give me ocs or owi (original weapon ideas) or major and minor plot points to use 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/294576636

I need suggestions for my new book 

Hello