I think that 'Yours Truly, Gracie' is an awesome book! However, just a few tips that I'd picked up while writing my book.
Maybe you could elaborate on the things that happened in between the main events? So that some events can be longer and then the book can be longer. Also, maybe you can include some of Gracie's personal thoughts and feelings in the events. Other than that, I feel that the book is GREAT. This last thing is not something that you need to do, it's just something I've been hoping for you to do! Maybe when you have the time... you can have the time you can add a cast? I would like that very much. If you need any help with cast or with anything really, feel free to just talk to me. I really want to help you. Keep up the good work, by the way! I really want to read the rest of 'Yours Truly, Gracie'. Thanks for all the support you gave to my book!
