judymcfadden31

I miss old wattpad. You could read as many stories as you want offline, you didn't have to pay for popular books, and there was a larger opportunity for people to discover your book and read. Now it all feels like everything is for money.  Wattpad had a good thing going in the past, I'd always come here and continue reading a book when I didn't have any wifi or data. Can't do it now and that's just...dull. 

judymcfadden31

I miss old wattpad. You could read as many stories as you want offline, you didn't have to pay for popular books, and there was a larger opportunity for people to discover your book and read. Now it all feels like everything is for money.  Wattpad had a good thing going in the past, I'd always come here and continue reading a book when I didn't have any wifi or data. Can't do it now and that's just...dull. 

judymcfadden31

You walk into a dark forest and there in the center rested a cabin, made from the dark wood that surrounded that cabin. A single lantern gleams brightly against the dark background, the orangy yellow light illuminating a door that slowly opened. With the darkness settling in and the moon no-where insight, you headed in.  It looked so normal; a nice fireplace that heated the room, a rocking chair with a stool resting in front of it, and nicknacks that decorated the room to tell a story.
          
          This is the description for the current book I'm rewriting, if you don't mind. Can you give me feedback?

judymcfadden31

You know, sometimes I feel bad about just being alive because there are times where others just make me feel lesser or stupider than what I truly am. I mean I know I'm not that way but as a child, we expect to be given praise or be talked to like we are an adult that is truly respected. Don't yell at us, or talk down to us like we are lesser than you are just because we are younger or maybe don't have that many experiences in a field. I just...need you to talk to me like I'm not wasting your time at least.