I am a writer, currently trying to write a collection of poetry to make into a book, so any feedback would be amazing for me, anything from "this type of poetry doesn't sound interesting enough to put in a book" to "this line doesn't sound good" I will take anything into consideration, it is my true dream to become a writer. 
My personal life, is very scattered and I have so much going on/have had so much happen and I want to share my experiences good and bad to send a message, one that will hopefully change whoever reads my work. 
Thank you to everyone who takes the time to read my writing, I appreciate it.