@Killertofu01
A good way to get a lot of feed back is to go to community, click on clubs, and then go to improve your writing. There is a help desk that has where people will give critiques and even help edit your story.
Also, reading other stories, popular or not popular, your story will show up on reccomended stories for people to read. If you read and give your feedback to writers that are trying to achieve the same thing you are, then most will definitely return the favor. I know that I will.
If you need any help, message me. :)