Aside from a few grammar mistakes here and there, your writing is very skillful and good. You employ new words and phrases which are lackluster in other stories of this sort, your descriptions of appearance, surroundings, emotions and actions are quite unique. Overall it was a very pleasant read. I wish you would continue this story, but I see it was last updated in 2019, so maybe you just don't feel like putting in work and thought into it anymore, or maybe you're just busy with other things. Sad but understandable. You have the talent, I'll tell you that.
