@khud_hi_kaafi_hun
Heyy i deleted my book I will publish it in future for sure abhi... I m not ready.... I will do it in future.
.sorryyy
@aradhanaaa no problem....I can understand....abhi 11th hai, padhai ka bhi bahut tension hai and career bhi dekhna hai No need to worry...jab padhai and career ka sab sort put ho jaaye tab araam se likhna
Heyyy check the characters chapter again I have made some edits.... Aapke details ko thoda dhyan me rkhte hue..... Thanksyouuuuu bbyy
Brooo broo tell me abt urr likes and dislikes abt the storyyyy!!!
@aradhanaaa no problem broo (just don't mind the English i littrealy wrote it in 2 minutes) I am also writing my own sci-fi books, it includes scientific and space-related topics like blackholes, wormholes, multiverse, time bending and more complex topics
@aradhanaaa well it's really good for your first try....(I started reading romance just 1 months ago otherwise I read sci-fi so giving my advice according to this) Actually it would be great if you add more hindi dialouges yk ut just makes the tone more chaotic And also use full sentence and punctuation really well instead of "...." it would be great to end sentences with full stop Add more comedy scenes in the chapter's beginning...and slowly add depth to the character slowly in the book Add more characters to the story, readers like complexity Also add accidental relationship between the leads like meeting in a wedding and male it more enemies to lovers trope because readers like that trope Also could you add the CHARACTER AESTHETICS and MAIN LEADS so the readers could know how the character is and who to ship early And you are really doing great, just a few tweeks and this will become best
@khud_hi_kaafi_hun thankss yrrr vote krne liyee
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