kinghanie

hi everyone, I’m sorry I haven’t uploaded a new chapter yet. I promise an update is coming soon. also, if you love Draco Malfoy, I really suggest giving @riddlewitch13’s fic a read!

kinghanie

Will not update today since it’s Halloweekend! have a wonderful Halloween, everyone <3

xoxoitsk5

@kinghanie Enjoy your Halloween pretty! the story is so good,  I'm enjoying it well miss thang. Keep up your good work.
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lolthisgirlcanwrite

Yooo love the story so far ur such a talented writer! I was just wondering if there's any schedule to when the chapters come out? Just curious, but keep but the great work ur amazinggg!!!!
          
          
          

kinghanie

hello! I dont have any schedule when it comes to updating chapters, I only update if I can :))
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kinghanie

Hey guys! Before I work on the next chapters, I’d love to hear your thoughts and feedback on the story so far. Let me know how I can make it better. and also, do you prefer it to have some spice or none?

greentagg

@kinghanie First of all, great writing! The perspective switches are fun and the characters are greatly believable. :) Some random ideas/tips that you can experiment with:
            - Random Greg Heffley POV LMAO
            - More depth in Rodrick's personal experience w/ women (in this story, is he normally popular w/ women, has he dated before, etc...)
            - More depth in why Rodrick is willing to bother Regina 
            - Raise the stakes for those two, right now the love-hate relationship is there but the stakes don't feel quite high enough (is there anything else to make them hate each other more?)
            
            Have fun writing and, despite the MANY eyes on your work- just do what you like! Go crazy :)
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mk947698

@kinghanie yesss and it’s amazing  the plot is so so good
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I_have_places_to_be

You're doing an amazing job! Love the plot, keep doing your thing and it will be great <3
            Some spice would be good (but not to much maybe? It's up to you anyway c:)
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