@Lilyann241211 Hey there, thank you so much for reading my book! It’s been a while since I wrote Forever, but I think my plan was to have a chapter where Hyeon goes to Ean for a report. She says that she had flagged down some people walking by the house she was kept in. They obviously set her free. Even though they ask if she wants to go to the police, she makes up an excuse and says that she had accidentally ‘locked herself in her own home’, even though she was infact kidnapped.
For the house search, they had to find clues as to where Taesoo could be keeping Hyeon. I don’t really have good memory about that chapter, but Taesoo kept photos of Hyeon was was just being a creep and a weirdo.
As for the walking around part, I think my plan for that was to also be included in the chapter where she talks to Ean for the report. He asks her why she didn’t go to a police station or anything, Hyeon says she just had to go to a place where she felt safe (her runaway spot in Yong-in) to ground her back into reality.
Honestly, if i could rewrite the book to make the storyline better and clearer, I would, but in my opinion it’s so cringe I can’t stand to read over it, so sadly that book is long gone.