kintsugi_wonderland

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figuring out how to order scenes is an absolute pain.
          	telling the story out of order to make it more engaging opened that can of worms.
          	
          	(p.s. working on a story that hasn't been posted at all; solar's story now has a culinary school and confirmed b-plot, but is currently still offline and on pause until I figure some shit out for this one) (might be too ambitious for a first draft)

malachi_malachite

@kintsugi_wonderland thats a very novel and brill strategy- i luv it <3 thenks much for sharing ^^
          	  
          	  these details sound exciting ^^
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Dominique-Payne

@kintsugi_wonderland That's what I call a can of worms if I've ever seen one T_T
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kintsugi_wonderland

this message may be offensive 
figuring out how to order scenes is an absolute pain.
          telling the story out of order to make it more engaging opened that can of worms.
          
          (p.s. working on a story that hasn't been posted at all; solar's story now has a culinary school and confirmed b-plot, but is currently still offline and on pause until I figure some shit out for this one) (might be too ambitious for a first draft)

malachi_malachite

@kintsugi_wonderland thats a very novel and brill strategy- i luv it <3 thenks much for sharing ^^
            
            these details sound exciting ^^
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Dominique-Payne

@kintsugi_wonderland That's what I call a can of worms if I've ever seen one T_T
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Dr_Zeuss

I just came back to check Wattpad and was greeted with 32 comments from you… I just want to say you are AMAZING and I can’t tell you how grateful I am that you found my story and have decided to read it. This means so much to me as an author to see that you’re engaged in something I read, and that’s part of why I like to write anyways. Never in my LIFE have I received this much attention or dedication to one of my stories. Thank you so much :)

Dr_Zeuss

Laugh away! I just wanted to let you know I appreciate the feedback you give me. Have fun reading!
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kintsugi_wonderland

@Dr_Zeuss p.s. I remembered that I had other responsibilities like halfway through reading, so that's why it might look like I abruptly stopped commenting. but now I can continue reading :)
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kintsugi_wonderland

@Dr_Zeuss is it bad to say that I laughed at this? honestly I forget I have a habit of sending a storm of comments, so I'm glad you enjoy them :)) I'm grateful you decided to participate in Tegsa b/c I got to see your book and give it a try! - I love when a book gets me this excited :)
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R_A_Jones

Hey, thank you for the votes on my poems, hope you liked them :)

R_A_Jones

im glad you enjoyed : )
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kintsugi_wonderland

@R_A_Jones
            I enjoyed your collection :) the poems where Celtic mythology and folklore play a more important role were the ones I found most intriguing! ("A Celtic Gathering" was one of them :)
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elveloy

Hi there, just saying thank you for reading and voting for my short story, Sylph :)

elveloy

@kintsugi_wonderland Thank you! :)
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kintsugi_wonderland

@elveloy 
            I'm rooting for you in the Smackdown!
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kintsugi_wonderland

@elveloy 
            Hi :) I love how you brought elements of a 1778 British novel to a speculative fiction contest swordfight. It was delightful to follow Victoria's story and easy for me to root for her at the end!
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kintsugi_wonderland

"fall (the changing of the seasons)" is a rewrite of a poem some of you have already read ❤ except for one or two metaphors, it retains all of its original imagery.

kintsugi_wonderland

wattpad has been screwing with my formatting, but the second stanza can be read either as it is or imagine it centered like the rest
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