@kiranhafeez
Hey Kiran - I hope you are good. The recent chapter of YOURS was really good. I really love shams and zarnish's couple. They are different from the stereotype as in every story the girl forgives the bad guy who turns green flag but here you maintained equality between genders. Great lesson ❤️ and please complete ' I hate you ' one shot from the romance series - Thank you !
Hi please update our journey of love
Hi is there sequal our accidental marriage I would love read about rameez and qandeel
Assalamualaikum Kiran how are you?
R uh okay?
Update soon
Hey, hope you will be fine
I love your books
You're best and you should know this
I just had little request can you change ending of. "HIS". it's so sad I can't forget it
And I'm your old follwer
You're are the first writer I read and loved it please consider my request
@Its_giga I will surely go that book to edit. And yes I will change the end as I also had first thought of happy ending as per script of the book but then suddenly I've written a sad ending which aches me too. I will surely go to change it
In book be mine don't you think jahan's father cheated on his first wife by marrying behind her back firstly only to fulfill last wish of his dying friend and later on lying to his first wife and mother of his kids and staying with the so called friend turned wife for pity for her treatment and later on making a child with her?Isn't it first hand Betrayal to his wife? The main thing he kept it all hidden in pretext of business trips which extended to years while the first wife struggled alone with kids he was making babies.He say he did for fullfilling last wish of a dying woman whom he didn't loved but in later chapters when he was talking to the picture of his so called friend the person is love of his life.So what does it make of his first wife-a big joke?Doesn't it?Why married her if he was in love with his friend and destroyed her life moreover none of them suffered karma.Only first wife suffered.Atleast in fiction we can show karma hits bad to cheaters and liars so as to give society a message.You have a huge fan following.Young girls read and fantasise.They might get influenced by such narratives that destroying a marriage for their own so called interest is ok.First wife's hatred for jahan is justified acc to me as he is living example of her husband's debauchery and Betrayal and lies.Why should she raise his second wife's son lovingly it's not her burden acc to quran.But she was expected by husband and when she didn't loved him equal to her own kids she is turned a villain.Why not such men die along with their hidden wife's and their kids be raised in an orphanage?I suppose if the husband died along eoth his so called love of life(mother of jahan)although it would have been tough but first wife would have raised her kids happily and not face constant heartbreak and Betrayal by looking at jahan.Polygamy is allowed in Islam but not constant lying.please reply and justify.Why not karma hit both the so called selfish friends ??
@kiranhafeez atleast in sequel which you are penning show how his kids treated him atleast jahan treated him showing him the real face if his debauchery by never talking to him ever as he is a liar and him loosing his respect in his kids eyes and dying alone with only the woman whom he betrayed by his side . None of his kids lifted his janaza or came to see him as he was breathing his last and openly showed their hatred for him in front of him . Atleast her kids should have stood up for her but in your book no one took step up for her. So who lost emotionally ? First wife . The husband didn't lost anything according to me . Atleast in your narrative it was never there . No apology to first wife no hatred for him . According to readers who get influenced it would be no matter what if we betray and lie nothing bad is coming after us . Allah won't punish us at all but it will be the innocent who would bear all hatred ..like his first wife was hated by all
Thank you so much for sharing your honest thoughts. I truly appreciate how deeply you’ve connected with the story. You're right—Jahan’s father made morally questionable choices, and my intention was never to justify betrayal or lying. Instead, I wanted to show the emotional complexity of such situations that unfortunately exist in real life too.
The pain and strength of the first wife were meant to reflect the silent suffering many women face, and I agree—she had every right to feel betrayed. I didn’t want to glorify polygamy or hidden marriages, but to show the emotional cost of such decisions.
Not all karma comes as punishment—sometimes, emotional loss and guilt are the real consequences. I respect your view, and I’m grateful you shared it. It helps me grow as a writer. ✨
Hey I just wanted to know what happened to mahi in your story ARRANGED MARRIAGE, shy did she die
Hi i hope you're doing well
I just love reading your books
So when i finished our hidden marriage you wrote about rameez being in love with ashar's sister
Are you going to write about them ?
