I love to write, but I don't mind a bit of criticism either. So share your thoughts: Where are my strong points? What is my weak point? How can I improve? What should I keep the same?

I have grown up moving from place to place and for the most part without my father who is more like a shadow on the edge of my life. I live with my 12 year old half brother Michael, my mother, my mother's german-shepard/pitbull/lab mix Xzavier, Teenie my brother's 6 month old kitten that we raised   over the summer along with his brother and my 6 month puppy Micah. Micah is a black lab, pit-bull mix that I raised from the time she was 5 hours old; so she thinks I'm her mom,  having been the one to feed her by myself from the time she was a baby. As you can tell I am a true animal lover, I've been rescuing baby cats and dogs with my mother since I was 5 years old and probably always will.

Although I am a animal lover what I truly want to do when I get older is become a doctor, it has been my dream to become a surgeon for years now and that is my ultimate goal although I will continue writing throughout my life. 

I am a vegetarian and have been since I was 7 years old
Wolves are my favorite animals
My favorite colors are indigo well most shades of purple