kooksandpearls

HIII MY LOVES!!! chapter 73 is out! i hope you all enjoy, lemme know all your thoughts!! love ya!! <3

Marie_Jones007

@kooksandpearls i would love to share it but i feel uncomfortable to share it would be possible to continue this conversation to another platform and if you are okay with that my username is marie_jones1 on discord
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kooksandpearls

HIII MY LOVES!!! chapter 73 is out! i hope you all enjoy, lemme know all your thoughts!! love ya!! <3

Marie_Jones007

@kooksandpearls i would love to share it but i feel uncomfortable to share it would be possible to continue this conversation to another platform and if you are okay with that my username is marie_jones1 on discord
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amethystcherries

HI MY LOVE! i’m popping in here to say your rafe fic is one of my absolute favorites & one of the best i’ve ever read. your updates truly make my entire day and thank you for writing it  <3

kooksandpearls

OH MY GOODNESS hi lovely!!!!! thank you so so so much this is so kind! <3 you’ve made my week! 
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kooksandpearls

uhhhh so i cannot believe this is technically the last chapter of season three?? it's insane! thank you so so much for reading and enjoying and all your comments and votes, it really means so so much!
          
          chapter sixty-three is up now!! enjoy <3
          
          

roligajulia

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I just wanted to say how much I’ve been enjoying this story. I love your version of Ralph. He feels like Ralph, flaws and all, instead of a watered-down fanfiction version of him.
          
          I think what I love most, though, is Sloane. She feels like her own person and not just someone who exists for Ralph. I really like that she doesn’t let him get away with his bullshit. She cares about him, but she’s also willing to tell him when he’s wrong and remind him that he’s not okay and that he needs to do better.
          
          A lot of stories either make Ralph completely toxic or completely redeemed, but you’ve found a balance that feels real. They both have their issues, and their relationship can be messy, but that’s part of what makes them so interesting to read. It feels like they’re actually growing instead of magically fixing each other.
          
          Honestly, Sloane fits into the story so naturally that it’s hard to remember she isn’t a canon character. I get excited every time there’s a new chapter.

kooksandpearls

oh my gosh, thank u for this message!! this is so so nice! <3 and i really agree with rafe being either wayyy too toxic, or completely just… not himself in fanfics. it’s a fine line, but i’m so glad u feel that i found a sweet spot! and it’s always been v important to me that sloane’s her own person with her own experiences and plot and development outside of rafe! it not only makes the story more enjoyable, but it makes it more fun to write as well. thank u so so much!! 
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