lakewriting

I recognize that this is unrelated to writing, but RIP Muhammad Ali.

matthieu-

BWFUP shares the vehemence of every last line as if they were cliffs—i always keep on falling. short read and i admire the resounding gesture it has. well done!

lakewriting

Thank you!  The vibe that you described is almost exactly the one I was aiming for.  It's good to know that.
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lakewriting

Sorry for not writing often.  I've had writers block for a while and I've been procrastinating editing (especially the most recent chpt. of Coffee Shop on Dreary Lane) and I should probably wait a while to change it so I don't have the perspective of just having written it.  At this point it just looks boring and repetitive (I've read it a lot so...) I will get to it eventually just not soon.