lalalosthee3

Jujur aku agak gimana gtu sama plot di mana Sakura jadi damsel in distress wkwk, seolah butuh bgt diselamatkan cowo (bukan Sasuke) buat dia 'move on'. Don't get me wrong, i don't like it too when she's a menye menye girl yg plin plan balik ke sasu atau ga cause he did her wrong, but i don't like it either when she needs another man to 'rescue' her. I mean like... a woman obviously could move on with her life without a man coming as her prince charming woi..
          	
          	Idk yaa but to me that kinda plot just so lame laaaa :(( 
          	Cause it's like Sakura portrayed as someone incapable of doing it herself. So many ways to make the man regrets his wrong doings and so many ways to make the woman move on huftt

zettaseverina12

@ lalalosthee3  walau agak "alamak mampus aku", tapi lebih besar ke bersyukur karena bisa dapat sudut pandang orang soal karakter yg aku buat karena dari dulu pengen bgt digituin, soalnya aku tahu aku obsessed bgt pengen jadi si paling beda wkwk anjir jijik sndri sorry sorry😭, but at least finally aku udh dapat sudut pandang soal karakter buatan aku yg emang pengen bgt aku tahu soal ini. Tencuuuuuuu😭😘
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lalalosthee3

@zettaseverina12 my personal opinion yaaa, sebagai org yg ga mau ribet, aku kurang suka sii baca cerita di beberapa book kamu and even other authors yg nyiptain momen biar si sasu jadi brengsek typa man in order to get humbled later by badass saku but i was just like 'okk this one ain't my cup of tea so let's find another' 😃. Ofc kamu dan penulis lain punya preference masing2 and THAT'S NOT A PROBLEM, it's just my reading preference aja sii hehe. And i think it's driven by the fact that kita kan ngefandom buat senang senang jadi ngapain cari penyakit sendiri so yeah.... :''D
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zettaseverina12

@ lalalosthee3  butuh bgtt karakter Sakura yg aku buat di semua book aku diiniin kak, apa namanya? Di kritisi? Diceritain dari sudut pandang reader kalau Sakura di book aku itu gimana bagi mereka? I mean, aku juga pengen tahu pandangan orang ke Sakura di book aku. Terlalu "di jahat"kan or terlalu di apa"in ?"🥹
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lalalosthee3

Jujur aku agak gimana gtu sama plot di mana Sakura jadi damsel in distress wkwk, seolah butuh bgt diselamatkan cowo (bukan Sasuke) buat dia 'move on'. Don't get me wrong, i don't like it too when she's a menye menye girl yg plin plan balik ke sasu atau ga cause he did her wrong, but i don't like it either when she needs another man to 'rescue' her. I mean like... a woman obviously could move on with her life without a man coming as her prince charming woi..
          
          Idk yaa but to me that kinda plot just so lame laaaa :(( 
          Cause it's like Sakura portrayed as someone incapable of doing it herself. So many ways to make the man regrets his wrong doings and so many ways to make the woman move on huftt

zettaseverina12

@ lalalosthee3  walau agak "alamak mampus aku", tapi lebih besar ke bersyukur karena bisa dapat sudut pandang orang soal karakter yg aku buat karena dari dulu pengen bgt digituin, soalnya aku tahu aku obsessed bgt pengen jadi si paling beda wkwk anjir jijik sndri sorry sorry😭, but at least finally aku udh dapat sudut pandang soal karakter buatan aku yg emang pengen bgt aku tahu soal ini. Tencuuuuuuu😭😘
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lalalosthee3

@zettaseverina12 my personal opinion yaaa, sebagai org yg ga mau ribet, aku kurang suka sii baca cerita di beberapa book kamu and even other authors yg nyiptain momen biar si sasu jadi brengsek typa man in order to get humbled later by badass saku but i was just like 'okk this one ain't my cup of tea so let's find another' 😃. Ofc kamu dan penulis lain punya preference masing2 and THAT'S NOT A PROBLEM, it's just my reading preference aja sii hehe. And i think it's driven by the fact that kita kan ngefandom buat senang senang jadi ngapain cari penyakit sendiri so yeah.... :''D
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zettaseverina12

@ lalalosthee3  butuh bgtt karakter Sakura yg aku buat di semua book aku diiniin kak, apa namanya? Di kritisi? Diceritain dari sudut pandang reader kalau Sakura di book aku itu gimana bagi mereka? I mean, aku juga pengen tahu pandangan orang ke Sakura di book aku. Terlalu "di jahat"kan or terlalu di apa"in ?"🥹
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lalalosthee3

I will always love sasusaku bokep kampung iiwjiejsm

lalalosthee3

@zettaseverina12 belum syg, draft dah jadi tapi malas edit @__@
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zettaseverina12

@ lalalosthee3  woi kak wkwk, hantam terusssss. Yg Saku jadi sekretaris belum up kah di ao3?
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zettaseverina12

Kak Lala, link ao3 gak muncul di bio pdhl mau baca lagi wut wut wut. Sama ini kak, book yg SasuSaku pangku"an trus Sasuke mau di panggil om bukan Bapak ama  Sakura kapan di lanjutin hikz

lalalosthee3

@zettaseverina12 atau ketik aja usn aku, lalalosthee di ao3
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lalalosthee3

Cerita sekarang mulai banyak ditulis sama ai ya, bahkan di semua fandom dan jujur aku agak malas bacanya, boring dan ga ada feel. Yaahh bahasanya terlalu curated oleh mesin jadi hilang inti fanfic buat nyampein emosi yg author coba carry. That's why i always appreciate human made fanfic no matter how cringe or bad it is.

lalalosthee3

@zettaseverina12 ga ada kriteria tertentu sii it's just like if you get it you get it. mungkin karena terlalu banyak baca cerita di ffnet circa 2010s jadi langsung ngeh klo satu cerita tuh ai atau nggak :"""
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zettaseverina12

@ lalalosthee3  sampe ini belum paham bgt cara supaya langsung tahu ini ai tuh gimana? Kek bahwasanya contohnya gimana kak?
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zettaseverina12

Pantas tiba" book yg aku simpan yg hot hot itu gak ada lagi wkwkwk. Makasih udh tetap lanjut nulis kak

lalalosthee3

@zettaseverina12 hehe gitu deh dulu. Cerita aku masih up semua kok di ao3, nnti malam kalau selesai edit bakalan up yg baru juga di sana. 
            
            Buat sementara kayaknya aku belum mau up lagi deh di sini kalau cerita 25+  soalnya takut ke-suspend lagi wkwk
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