larryrbbns

I'm glad you liked! Hope you like The American Agent too. It was the first book that I wrote. 

@ericdabbs I liked it quite well as a matter of fact! And there is some resemblance to Cussler in there as he is probably my all time favorite author!! I have started another of your titles, The American Agent, and have enjoyed it so far. Hopefully I can follow up on Ocean Blue with the next title in that line when it is available. 

Thank you immensely! I appreciate that you took your free time to read my book and it's fantastic that you found it enjoyable.
            
            Best of luck with your job, my father has had times in his life where he also worked many more hours than the average, and I've seen first hand how tiring it is. I salute you for putting so much effort into supporting yourself and those you love, as well as putting in the work for your employers. 
            
            I'll await your next comment with patience, have an excellent weekend.

@MarkDerbyshire Well I finished the first book a bit quicker than expected.  Actually got a couple of days off and had some reading time. 
            
            First, definately enjoyed it. Good story line, well written, no major plot hole, and just enough suspense at  the end to make reading the second book seem like a good idea. At least 4 Stars Plus.
            
            Second, I already have added the second book to my Library and will go forward on it starting when I get time off in the next couple of weeks. I work for a large tire mfg and often work 60+ hours a week and we rotate days and nights. It can be quite wearysome after a while and then I dont have the energy to do much, even read.
            
            Again, this was an excellent read. You did a great job with it and I look forward to reading the second and any future volumes.
            
            LARRY

@larryrbbns Thank you so much for your feedback! I'll be eagerly awaiting your next instalment:)

@Claire-Merle I added your story to my library a few weeks ago then had to put really getting in to it till the other day. I usually wait a bit before I comment much on a story as I try to get a feel for where and what the author is heading for with the story first. So far I see no big blaring errors either in the story line or that sort of thing. Your characters are reasonably built and comfortable to get to know. Thats something I havent always been able to say about every book I have read on Wattpad. I like strong characters with strong back stories and well developed, believable mythos. I read everything on here as a rough draft. I dont pay a lot of attention grammer or spelling,  beliving that most writers will take care fo that in any cleanup for final drafts or before publishing, My concern is characters, plot, mythos. I also like to see writers work on secondary or side character development. Too few realize how important this. an be go telling a story. Secondary or side characters are great ways of getting backstory told or introducing new issues or people.  Sadly many often leave these as sketchy outlines only and miss how important they un can be. You seem to be trying to flesh out most all of your characters pretty well not just your main ones, and thats great. I also see you dont mind using a bit of "romantic" interaction between you characters. Although you havent done much so far, the occasional allusion here and there works quite well. I dont like straight romance (most guys dont) but I certainly dont mind a bit of it as long as it works within the story and enhances the overall story, which in your case so far it does. As I said, so far I have enjoyed the story and I look forward to finishing it. I will also look at your other work as I have time. I will comment futher when we get closer to the end or if I see some things major. But for now, hope you have a great New Years!!!

Yes I did enjoy it. A bit different that most stories I read but definately a good read. I have also started the second book and have reached where you are with uploads, so now I have 6 books I am raefing at once!!!!! Gitta love Wattpad!!!