laureas

wait sorry guys I gotta take down the prologue for 'From My Blood' again because I forgot about major detail to include. I have no idea how I forgot again

laureas

I'll post it tomorrow when I edit it, I've got to head to bed or I'll be awake all night
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laureas

okay so I have a question. Do you prefer, for example; John: how are you? or "how are you?" he asked, because I'm starting to write the chapters for my books and I've decided to use the movie for one of them and the first example is how the script is written and I wanted you're advice and preference, so if you could let me know :)

laureas

( @HogwartzPrincess ) no it's alright, thanks for the advice, I also get confused sometimes with the back and forth conversation without the characters names
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HogwartzPrincess

Sorry not trying to nitpick or be annoying 
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HogwartzPrincess

I wish I could I just end up struggling and I’m always sad cause the summary looked so good and so did the bits I read… I’m dyslexic tho so it might just be because of that. 
            If your are writing like the second one though, Sometimes it’s best to put a reminder of who’s speaking if it’s a quick back and forwards between characters as sometimes it’s confusing who’s said what instead of “who are you?” He asked either mae sure you know who’s POV it’s from or have it be “Who are you?” John asked
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