Hi,
I just finished reading your story *With You in the Fire*, and I felt like I needed to write to you.
There is something very quiet but powerful in the way you describe Thomas and the girl. The line “Thomas ha encontrado el espejo de su alma en el corazón de una chica rota” stayed with me longer than I expected. It feels honest, like you are not trying to impress anyone, just telling something real. I also liked the tone you kept throughout. It feels soft but heavy at the same time, especially in the way you show brokenness without making it loud.
I think what makes your story special is that it does not try too hard. It lets emotion sit naturally, and that is rare. It feels like something that could grow into something very deep and memorable.
At the same time, it feels like the story is still hidden. Not because it lacks anything, but because the right people have not really seen it yet. It has that quiet kind of strength that sometimes gets missed early on.
I was also curious, have you published any of your work on Amazon or Goodreads before?
