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hey, can you check out my book?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410383438-frat-fealty

Hello! Could you help me by reading and commenting on my 800 word prologue? I edited it heavily! And could use some criticism from others!

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Hi! I hope you're having a great day. I know how much you love a good steamy romance story, so I wanted to gently share my friends new short story, Silver Eyes & Secrets. It’s a fast-paced, high-tension neighbor romance with plenty of spice that starts on day one! it would mean the absolute world to me if you checked it out. No pressure at all, and thank you for your time! ✨