Jaycecall

Hi there! I was wondering if you would be willing/ available to edit and possible critique my story: Laugh & Cry. I only have 2 chapters down, since I started the book today. But I believe I need help with my punctuation and all that jazz. Would you be able to help me?

RandomestFandoms

HI!  Would you be willing to help me with my story Codename Kryptonite.  I mean, I'd love help with grammar and that stuff, but I also need some help because I have a major case of writer's block.  I have a point A, a point C, and even a point G but I don't know how to connect them and my best friend isn't helping because she doesn't like (and gets a bit offended sometimes) by how I'm writing one of the characters (who's LOOSELY based on her) and it's throwing me off.  If you could help, that would be awesome! :D