Sorry for not posting something here for a while. I've been working on my next remaster. It'll most likely be done tomorrow morning. I can't wait for you guys to read it
Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!
I finally posted the first chapter of my next remaster. Sorry, it took so long. I had some writer's block, and I had to take care of some personal matters. hopefully, you guys will enjoy it.