localweirdo1

Hey guys... I'm working on a new chapter but I'm also working on another book, and I need ya'lls help. In this book should I make Tech a softie or like a bully. Btw this book is a highschool AU soooooooooooooooo

localweirdo1

Do I make a flashback detailed or vague?

localweirdo1

@Sub_2_Techno it's pretty significant I'd say.. so I might put a but of details but I also want room for people to theorize before the rest of it get told throughout the story, if that makes sense
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Sub_2_Techno

@localweirdo1 It depends on how important the flashback is for the rest of the storyline. Also depends on how much you want your readers to know, and how much you want to keep a mystery. Like for suspense or foreshadowing.
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localweirdo1

Okay so I'm making a new part that will probably posted late tonight or tomorrow, some parts are going to be in enchanting table. Would you guys want me to put the translation next to the words or would you want me to do a thing where I'll basically explain what they say through text. It's hard to explain. 
          
          "Pretend this is enchanting table (are you hungry?)" 
          
          or like
          
          "Pretend this is enchanting table" I can't understand what they're saying but whatever this creature is, I'm pretty sure it's hungry because they rubbed their stomach while talking. 
          
          There's a bad example but I hope y'all understand what I mean.