louis3rddick28
Guys this stopped me dead in my tracks i legit froze
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Guys this stopped me dead in my tracks i legit froze
https://vm.tiktok.com/ZNRkbBLv1/
Guys this stopped me dead in my tracks i legit froze
https://vm.tiktok.com/ZNRkbBLv1/
Ive been here 3 other times yet i have no idea how to control myself
AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAH
KISS ALL THE TIME. DISCO OCCASIONALLY.
OUT THE 6TH OF MARCH CHAT I CANT
The best thing ive ever written
The opening line of unbelievers is when we meet the main protagonists Harry and Louis. The book opens with the lime "fuck you're tight." The word choice of 'fuck' tells the reader that Louis is feeling quite frustrated as the task of giving it to Harry up the bum rather difficult to do. Which leads us onto the word choice of 'tight' which further proves why Louis is frustrated, but also shows inexperience from Harry as he is a virgin, so this feeling of Louis being inside him is completely new and strange. The short sentence emphasises the situation as there is no time to find other words to use, futher showing Louis' frustration as its straight to the point and clear to understand. The short sentence proves to be a very effective hook as this is the opening line and it leaves the reader with many question like; What is happening? Who is talking? Where are they? What is to come later on? Are they in a relationship? All these questions makes the reader think and want to continue reading to find out all these questions making the opening sentence very good and well thought out. But opens up some sensitive and more mature topics to prepare the reader and gives more comfort to continue to read on. So using word choice and a short sentence makes the opening line effective as there is possibilities on what could happen next and introduces the characters personalities a bit, Louis as the bossy and loud one where as Harry let's Louis rake control of the situation and sits back to let others do the work. All this to make an exceptional novel full of twists and turns to make for an excellent plot and shows the themes of sexuality, romance, family issues, enemies to lovers and how anything can happen and you just have to let life happen and how you can't control everything because love just happens you can't force or deny it.
@louis3rddick28 WAIT I REMEMBER READING THIS WHILE REREADING UNBELIEVERS I MISS THAT VERSION UGHHH
FUCK OFF UNBELIEVERS IS GONE FROM HERE I CANT BE HAVING THIS MY POOR COMMENTS MY ENTIRE HIGHER ENGLISH SKILL PARAGRAPH IS GONE (i swear its in my notes somewhere) OMG I CANT HANDLE THIS
HIII
@louis3rddick28 let's ignore how I'm so late to respond but so real who TF cares about analysis on shakespeare
@rruwaydax so real i didnt give a single shit for chem last year
Whoever said heated rivalry was just like reading unbelievers as so right cuz omg the Déjà vu I was having
NEW THEMEEE
and its my favourite animal thats not niche anymore a sea lion
I’m reflecting on childhood rn and I’m just realising how stupid I really was and how my dad trusted me way too much to give my own real legit tools at the age of 7 and whenever he was using wood I would use the scrap bits to make worm houses bitch it was 2 bits of wood screwed together with a bit or dirt and leaves on top then I’d go to the field near my house by myself btw at 7 to dig up worms and take them in my hands for a solid 5 min walk and put them in my ‘house’
1. Who lets a 7 year old have a drill, saw, hammer and access to sharp screws
2. What makes 2 slabs of wood screwed together a house
3. Who let me wonder about the streets myself at 7 (btw I live in a right shithole that’s sketchy as fuck)
4. Why was I walking about with a hand full of worms
Question for my American baddies
What is Atlanta airport and jfk airport like??
Cuz I’m going to Florida in the summer (if my mum finally books the flights) and the cheapest flights aren’t direct so today’s option is the cheapest so far and it’s
Manchester > Atlanta (virgin) > Orlando (delta) on the way there
Orlando > JFK (delta) > Manchester (virgin) in the way back
Also what’s virgin international like and what’s delta domestic like bc I’ve never flew with them I’ve only done Manchester straight to Orlando with aer lingus so yeah
@rruwaydax no I know not even doing this anymore it’s Heathrow straight to Orlando I honestly can’t wait you wanna hop in my suitcase
Do I watch house of Guinness for the 4 time this week???
Yes I am fuck it
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