lovhjm

Hi! Chapter 3 of Towards the Gentle Waves has been updated:) Please feel free to give feedback and criticism huhu. I highly appreciate it, as I strive to be better. Tysm! ⋆.˚ °‧    ·｡
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justmereree

Hello! Are you open for genuine rtr? If yes pls let me so we can start reading po.^⁠^

lovhjm

@justmereree hi! i stopped at chapter 6 of ur story in the same time how SOA only has 6 chaps in total! i hope that is fine with youu po
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justmereree

@lovhjm np! we can do it anytime po of di na u busy hehe just inform me. Thanks!(⁠｡⁠･⁠ω⁠･⁠｡⁠)⁠ﾉ⁠♡
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lovhjm

hi! i love reading new works and also giving feedbacks. however, I still have a lot of stories on my list right now that i need to finish. is it okay if it takes abit of time? i'm a bit of a slow reader but I really read all the stories!
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Plumeara

Hi! I am so sorry if dito na ako nag reach out, I can't find your social media or idk if I messaged the right acc. So, I know you read my story and I wanna say thank you. I started reading yours and all I can say is you are so amazing. Like literally my face was  the whole na nag babasa ako. And with that, napa isip ako kung anong iniisip mo sa way ng pag susulat ko habang binabasa mo yung gawa ko. Like, with your writing style alone? You deserve thousands thousands of readers na! Ayon, ion want you to think I reached out just because I want your opinion but yeah

lovhjm

+ I want to add something pala. I suggested your story to some of my friends and they like it! I have one friend who has quite a picky taste in writing style and stories (she's persistent in only reading popular stories becoz of it) but she said that she can see herself reading your story 'till the end:)
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lovhjm

Hi, Plumeara! thank you for reaching out! Idk if you remember/know but I was anon who commented on your post last time. I really like your story, and it was on my library for quite some time now. First read ko nun is offline so I can't comment and yung votes ko hindi nagreflect. That's why when you incorporate my suggestion, I was estatic and read it again! but I made sure to comment and vote this time(which I couldn't do last time) because I want to support you! Though I'm quite a slow reader myself hehe  
            
            As for your question, I really like your writing style. Maybe because it kinda remind me of myself idk? hehe. That feeling where I can see myself writing this story? ganun yung impression na nakuha ko nung first read ko. But it wasn't the only reason I got hooked! Nagulat nalang ako na I was already invested in the story and the characters:> You wrote them so well! I especially like Celeste.  
            
            Hmm, ano pa ba? Its probably how certain characters made me annoyed fr. kuha talaga nila yung inis ko. I also like the way the dialogues and scenes mesh well together— like in a drama or something! You have a good perception of cues and timing which I really like that made certain scenes great! And I really like it!:) So far yun lang naman masasabi ko since the story is still on its earlier stage. You're doing amazing already! Keep writing your story the way you intended it to and the way you like it:>
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Plumeara

@Plumeara omg hindi nag pakita iyong shock emoji huhu
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