lozzabubba

@vamp_freak313 Heyyy, yes i will definitely read your story. it sounds good, plus it's the type of stories i like reading... but i will not have time to read it for another week. but i really will read it :) eventually.
          	
          	@GUMBiiE Heey :) i'll try read as many of your stories as i can... and i will give you as much constructive critsism as i can... but i don't think i will help very much ahha but i'll definitely try. :)

lozzabubba

@vamp_freak313 Heyyy, yes i will definitely read your story. it sounds good, plus it's the type of stories i like reading... but i will not have time to read it for another week. but i really will read it :) eventually.
          
          @GUMBiiE Heey :) i'll try read as many of your stories as i can... and i will give you as much constructive critsism as i can... but i don't think i will help very much ahha but i'll definitely try. :)

Beautiful_Diaster93

Hey, my name is Kyh. And I was wondering if you could read my new story P.S. I Hate You. I know these can get annoying, but I would really appriecate it if you could. If you like it, become an fan, comment, vote, spread the word! If not thank you for taking the time out of your day to read this message. 
          Here's an preview:
          
          P.S. I Hate You
          Chapter One- Nicole
          The sun beamed down on me as it rose this morning. Last night's events flashed through my head, as I became more awake. The way he touched me, caressed me, held me; last night was amazing. The body next to me shifted and rolled over. I turned over and looked at his handsome sleeping face. Strongly defined chin, eyes the color of deep blue, wavy dark brown hair, perfectly pouty lips. This guy was every girls dream, but he isn't mine. Besides his charming good looks, he was and complete and utter asshole. He was inconsiderate, arrogant, cocky, condescending, everything you wouldn't want in a guy, yet every chick wants him! I don't get it. And yet he's lying right next to me. He's my enemy, and I just lost my virginity to him. 
          *******
          Two days earlier
          I was in AP Biology with my best friend, Jamie. He's been my best friend since we were in diapers. Jamie stood 6'2', athlete’s body, square chin, eyes the shade of jade green, the lips of an Greek God. Yep, my best friends hot, but he was so much more to me. He was my big brother, my protector, my hard rock. All the girls have been wanting him since high school started, but he's had his eye on somebody else. That somebody would be my older sister/twin Samone. He's been in love with her for years, but she's never know his true feelings, because he has never gotten the courage to tell her. And every time he does, it always finds a way to backfire. Jamie's also the McGinley High's star quarterback. 
          Mrs. McKee was boring us as usual, when Ethan Robinson decided to walk in as if he own the world. Ethan Robin was the school's most popular guy next to Jamie.

GUMBiiE

Heyy Laureen !! I know these things can be super mega annoying, but I just wanted to ask if you could check out my stories. Or just one of them ^^
          
          I jst started a new story called 'Guardian Angel + Me = NOT good' and i wuld really appreciate some constructive critism. Votes & Comments would help xD 
          
          Or ..
          
          You can just read one of the other ones, whichever one catches you're attention :) 
          
          You don't have to if you dnt want, but i wuld really appreciate it! :)
          
          Thnx in advance!

chezkdj

hey i knw these messages get really annoying but i just wondered if u could check my story out, a pirates daughter in this age - no way!!!!! please i would really appreciate any feedback lol and if u dont want 2 i understand lol =D